The best way for a society to prepare its young people
for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is
by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not
competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to
which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to
address the most compelling reasons and/or examples
that could be used to challenge your position.
Every society is governed by their respective leaders. Leaders running the society, at some point of time were also fledgling. So what made them attain such an estimable position? Certainly, the understanding and cooperating with their colleagues and staffs made them what they are now. I mostly agree with the prompt stating that the most suitable way to prepare the upcoming generation for leadership in any industry is by inculcating the personality of cooperation for two reasons. However, I do concede that at some point of time competitiveness comes into picture as an instance of gaining maximum votes in an election.
First of all, to prepare youngsters for the role of leadership, a major skill is to understand the demands of inter-departmental officials and fulfill the demands. Thus, cooperation is the key skill maintaining the relations between various departments of an organization. For instance, a Chief Executive Officer in a Tech Company has to critically understand the company's sundry of tasks in order to execute with an efficient way. Company is supported by many teams like marketing, operations, software, design and various others. In order to avoid an imbroglio, a CEO has to cooperate with these teams in order to understand each departmental updates that are currently going on and after this he/she takes the crucial decisions for the betterment of the company.
Secondly, cooperative skills increases the confidence of the leader's colleagues and employees. By constantly keeping in touch with the industry partners and the employees, they get a sense of motivation and their productivity increases because of a sense of gratification in employees arises. Employees feel that their work or contribution is valued. Thus,youngsters who haven't seen the world, if taught to be cooperative, can make differences in their future and benefit the organization as well
However, in some cases the sense of cooperation can seem to be futile. There are many cases where competitive mindset can change the game. For example, Reliance Industry was the pioneer of petrochemical industry in India in early 2000s. However, now Reliance Industry has become a giant conglomorate of numberous industries from FMCG to Petrochemicals and fashion. This is because of the competitiveness and cooperating with different small scale industries. If the owner of Reliance did not focus on how to be a leader in an entire nation, he would have kept running the same petrochemical industry and the fate would be other way round of what it is now.
In conclusion, young people should be entreated with developing the cooperative thinking as to maintain good relations and further increase the chances of growing together with the employees.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , youngsters
...eir work or contribution is valued. Thus,youngsters who havent seen the world, if taught to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ribution is valued. Thus,youngsters who havent seen the world, if taught to be coopera...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ustry has become a giant conglomorate of numberous industries from FMCG to Petroc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31422018349 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1678646343 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9399174131 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185310568871 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514128709798 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043621702572 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932548902628 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402866136331 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , youngsters
...eir work or contribution is valued. Thus,youngsters who havent seen the world, if taught to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ribution is valued. Thus,youngsters who havent seen the world, if taught to be coopera...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ustry has become a giant conglomorate of numberous industries from FMCG to Petroc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31422018349 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1678646343 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9399174131 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185310568871 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514128709798 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043621702572 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932548902628 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402866136331 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.