The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by installing in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The claim is a generalized one which states cooperation rather than competition is necessary for preparing the youth for leadership. According to me, a sense of competition is equally important for a person to posses good leadership qualities. it helps an individual to go the extra mile in order to win. Hardly anything is achieved when society is filled with discord, but cooperation alone would not help in getting the extra push that is needed in order to succeed in anything.
A good leader is expected to work tirelessly. competition makes working tirelessly somewhat easy, because the will to lead within the competition helps to ease the burnout. A good leader would cooperate and manage a team very efficiently, but if the competitive spirit is missing, it is highly unlikely that the team would achieve as much as its competition. installing a sense of competition is equally important because more amount work is done because of the desire to be better than one's competition.
In automotive industry, cooperation will help in making a car smoothly and distributing the work content evenly; but compettiion will help in manufacturing five cars instead of three which in turn would burgeon the profits. Similarly if we consider a government, cooperation might help in getting things done smoothly, but when it comes to achievements, installing a sense of competition is a necessity.
competition has two sides like a coin; brutal competition might lead to discontent in society or even riots and tumults, whereas a healthy competition will help everyone in the society improve. A healthy competition should exist where all the competitors improve by observing and adopting techniques which are beneficial to everyone. A leader needs to compete with others to along with observing achievements and accolades recieved by others. he or she needs to evaluate themselves and improve by learning and gaining insights from their respective competition.
In conclusion, my opinion states that installing a sense of healthy competition in a leader is as important as installing a sense of cooperation for him to improve and achieve better. A leader needs to know where he stands amongst the competition and work accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... leader is expected to work tirelessly. competition makes working tirelessly somewhat easy,...
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... makes working tirelessly somewhat easy, because the will to lead within the comp...
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...ments and accolades recieved by others. he or she needs to evaluate themselves and...
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...ghts from their respective competition. In conclusion, my opinion states that in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, similarly, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23184357542 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10618167456 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3953445592 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0625 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225479738098 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074467037109 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734938573335 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129602570234 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514271842508 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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