The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leadership quality is one of the important skill to inculcate in one's life.It is vital for one to build up his career. I agree with the claim which states that young people should be prepared for leadership in sense of cooperation rather than competition.The claim is quite convincing but there are some aspects where competing with he other is required.
Firstly, leadership is required in many fields like professional workspace including the company we work or the sport we play.For example, consider a cricket team participating in national sports event, the captain should possess the qualities such that his team members follow his orders.He and his team should cooperate ,understand and work as a team.There should not be competitive spirit among themselves.If the compete between each other ,the opponent team easily wins over them.So, maintaining team spirit and cooperation between themselves is important.
Moreover, in professional areas like multi national companies where we are working as a project lead, we must be able to cooperate with many of our colleagues.As a lead, we have to discuss the possibilities or alternate situations to complete the project.Rather than competing with other, working together makes the project successfully and more efficient.The lead should maintain the cooperative spirit in his colleagues or his fellow mates so the project goes smoothly and more reliable. So we must instils the people towards the sense of cooperation rather than competition.
Not only cooperation ,but we require competition in some areas like politics where we have to compete with the egregious people for the welfare of the society.When ever the opponent is outstandingly bad or mischievous person ,we must compete with him rather than accomplicing in his misdeeds. We must fight to win over him.There are situations where the mille around you is not positive.Leading them in the sense of cooperation results nothing.So, people should instils the competitive nature in the young people to fight over bad.
At last,I would like the conclude the claim saying that instilling the sense of cooperation in young people is one of the best way to improve ones leadership qualities. But,they should be competitive with the others based on the situation or field they choose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36639118457 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04523742892 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506887052342 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.463756917 60.3974514979 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.444444444 118.986275619 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 23.4991977007 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177814437395 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947510951005 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615325192283 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114909328688 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064781832063 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.