"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
With every generation, the youth of the country is the deciding factor in the development and success of that country. People at a young age are more energetic, more enthusiastic and more sympathetic towards the societal issues. In a country like India, the young people makes up the 70% of the population. With so much diversity around the globe, every country wants to make a statement out there, competing to be on the top. Yes, I believe the best way for a society, for a country to grow and lead in different sectors is by instilling a sense of cooperation in its young people.
The popular aphorism :"What you sow, so shall you reap" is perfect way of describing that whatever values we are instilling in our young genration today, that is what we will reap in future. The young people are novice and beginners and are still on the starting point of the life they are going to live. The different values like cooperation, self-love, confidence, helpful nature, kindness etc should be taught right from the time they join the schools.
Imagine a young boy always taught to do everything on his own and always taught to look out for the scores and the marks he get in schools/colleges,trying to be ahead of everyone. When he joins an IT organization as a software developer where he has to work with so many people right from the software testers, to mangers, to technical leads etc. It is definitely going to be difficult for him to ask help and provide help to others. He will try to complete the task in hand in a more competitive manner. This creates an unhealthy environment since you can't be always on the top. Being second can develop outrageous feelings in the person.
Better cooperation brings a healthy environment where people are helping each other to complete a task in hand, instills more confidence, kindness and better results for the inividual or the organization which in turn helps the country to move ahead.
We can see different examples where people cooperating with each other has helped produce better results like we see NASA and ISRO. Better cooperation has helped explore more about our planets and the space.
Therefore, I will like to conclude by saying that it's the cumulative responsibility of every individual to help instill better values and manners in our young generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
...ration today, that is what we will reap in future. The young people are novice and beginn...
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...int of the life they are going to live. The different values like cooperation, self...
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...confidence, helpful nature, kindness etc should be taught right from the time the...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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...es and manners in our young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, still, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88721804511 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85791441897 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6215686232 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16717657823 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492229016625 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542464484986 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864070891948 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342524841075 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.