The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
It is imperative for youth who are nurtured for positions of power and leadership to be adept at cooperating with their fellow peers and have a competitive spirit. Competition is important for any individual to improve themselves.Cooperation is pivotal for the existence of a group. For nurturing youth to become leaders, the society must inculcate both these elements into their minds.
A leader is a person who is able to effectively disseminate an idea among a group. Such a person must be must be adept at interpersonal communications, making good judgments about an idea by taking into consideration all the intricate details. It is important for a leader to be able to collaborate and cooperate with all his peers to produce the best output. So cooperation is one of the pillars for leadership in any domain.
For instance, the captain of a cricket team must be able to cooperate with his teammates. Cricket is a team sport consisting of 11 players on either teams. It is quintessential for the captain of the team to cooperate with his players for his team to win. If cooperation does not exist between the captain and the players, the team is destined to lose as they will not be able to effectively implement the right tactics to get a batsman's wicket or prevent the leakage of runs.
Competition is not only a pivotal for the creation of a leader but also for the development of a talented person. The sense of competition is an evolutionary feeling in humans that ha motivated them to portray themselves as the best among a tribe or for winning the heart of the loved one. This sense of competition forces one to set high benchmarks and motivates them to achieve the target inspite of facing obstacles. This makes an individual robust to failure and instills a never-say-die attitude which is an idiosyncrasy of a great leader. Hence, the society must provide a competitive environment to the youth and instill a sense of cooperation in them to mold them into great leaders.
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs. 50
- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership. 50
- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cooperation
...or any individual to improve themselves.Cooperation is pivotal for the existence of a group...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'must be'.
Suggestion: must be
...te an idea among a group. Such a person must be must be adept at interpersonal communications, ...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Cricket is a team sport consisting of 11 players on either teams. It is quintesse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85087719298 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11902244553 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4258580614 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209291625612 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816125418738 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057334229277 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132971118634 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582875547529 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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