The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones
Preaching knowledge is the medium of developing a society and teachers or guides are responsible for this significant task. There are couple of ways in which a good tutor can follow and one of them refers to presenting differences between good and bad terms. Appreciation and discussion about any positive activities as a role model before his devotees and discarding what is wrong can make an influencer better than others. So, I mostly agree with the prompt saying that the best way to teach is to praise positivity and ignoring negativity for two reasons that is going to be discussed. But there will be a concession regarding the fact that totally ignoring negative attributes can narrow down someones’s thought process and he won’t be able to differentiate if he doesn’t have proper knowledge to identify the adversities.
First of all, if a binary theory has to be assumed for universal prospects, positive-negative, good-bad can be the simplest way to do that. Human consciousness can find any result for comparison quite straight forward if they evaluate them just by these two parameters and the decision is obvious then. A great mentor must have the insight even to separate the subtle differences and confirm the negative things which won’t be beneficial. For example, a teacher is giving examples of novel men of the centuries before his students and informing them about what he did for the development of the country. But every nation has some controversial personalities who are hated and they aren’t famous for their immoral deeds. Therefore, he can skip the part to only impart enlightenment because sometimes the villains are taken as idol and that eventually results in reappearences of these characters which is not expected . That makes the statement’s authenticity of keeping things just two ways valid.
Secondly, appreciating someone’s positive actions motivate him to continue his work and with time, he can be the new teacher and thus a process will start from where we can expect society’s future leaders. A strong society will be created where only the flow of positive vibes like hope, diligence ,selflessness will be matter of discussion and negativity will be ruled out of consideration. For instance, non-profit organizations work to inspire people to join them with their voluntary work and they happen to be known as respcted institution where the young minds first get to know the legends like Mother Teressa and her ways to think and support the under-previliged people and the beginners find themselves with an aim to be true altruistic.As a result, the practice should emphasize on spreading right perspectives only.
Nonetheless, rejecting the contrasts is not completely effective because a part of learning is also to know why something is wrong. A fact can be supportive to this idea that if an educator doesn’t give the basic teaching about bad manners and when the student finds something offensive he wouldn’t protest them which is a moral responsibility because he wasn’t taught about the unscrupulous things and what to do in a situation like that. Therefore, the total process of learning falls apart and the one way path proves to not be always favorable.
A conclusion can be made that mostly the assertion is appropriate but incorporating the fact that just throwing away the counterparts completely is not a perfect solution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2794.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14548802947 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16313026257 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545119705341 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.351691288 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.352941176 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9411764706 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177051266258 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618615044126 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868808164738 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091611103362 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892396396663 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 100.480337079 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.