Today everyone is ready to praise someone for their positive actions and reluctant to point out the negative ones. But that is not something a teacher, parent or good friend of someone should do. For a person to become well rounded in his behavior both are needed praise and admonishment. Therefore students should be told of their negative actions while praising the positive ones.
Take the case of a student he might be good at studies and sports, but at the same time his behavior towards classmates is very rude. While praising about his performance in studies and sports he should be shown that the way he behaves with his peers is not the right way. If he is not made aware how his actions are not acceptable he would have trouble in his future life. For example, when he is at a job even though he performs well at his work, when there is a chance for promotion he might not be considered, because of his rude attitude. Here we can see how a person if not made aware of his negative actions, proved harmful to him for getting a recognition that he deserved.
When someone is made aware of his negative behavior it helps him to become a well rounded person. If positive actions are alone praised, he will only concentrate in them and only try it make those actions better. But when he is also made aware of the negative ones he will give attention those actions also and try to correct it. If such a step was taken by the teachers of the student mentioned in the previous paragraph, he would have got the promotion that he deserved.
The reason some sight for ignoring the negative actions of someone could be that pointing out negatives will make the person sad and feel bad about themselves. It is true, it will make them sad and feel bad about themselves, but this is for a short time only. As he improves those actions he will find that how better his life became, and he will be thankful to the teachers that made him realise those actions.
Hence, while praising the positive actions of a person, he should also be made aware of his negative ones, this provides a balanced feedback to the person and helps him become a well rounded person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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...es with his peers is not the right way. If he is not made aware how his actions ar...
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...ting a recognition that he deserved. When someone is made aware of his negative b...
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Suggestion: makes
...nly concentrate in them and only try it make those actions better. But when he is al...
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...ould be that pointing out negatives will make the person sad and feel bad about t...
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...helps him become a well rounded person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50890585242 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35514293894 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424936386768 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0353074968 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.235294118 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199179287432 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882394436168 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097688969327 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148725405924 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832715469418 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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