The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
"Children are the future of tomorrow". Should this phrase be associated with every child in the world? Indeed yes. When a child is born, every parent, or rather society expects the child will contribute to the society in some or the other way. However, this is possible if and only if a child possesses a benevolent attitude and not a notorious one. The question here, arises, is it fair, to only pay attention to positive actions and ignore the negative ones? This issue raises a plethora of questions and must be reached a conclusion after a careful scrutiny.
Parents and teachers play a major role in upbringing of a child. To some extent, the society also participates in raising of a child. It is necessary to observe the actions of a child as it reflects the family and society in which he/she resides. Yes, it is indeed true, parents should praise the children and make aware of their talents one possesses. For example, A.R.Rahman, an Indian music composer, at the age of 4, astonished his father by playing a small but complex musical melody on the harmonium. Well, if it would not have been his parents praising and support, India would never have one of the finest music composers till date. This was a result of Rahman's sedulous and placid attitude, which is evident that the negative actions were not ignored and corrected at the same time.
It is important to impart qualities like diligence and discipline among the children. Being an adult, the child will have to enter into professional world, where these qualities are tested and the person who is eloquent and faces the world is the only one who survives. Also, qualities like good etiquette, a calm and placid attitude, politeness, audacity to face several kind of situations and overcome fears, have to embedded into a child from an early age. If a child frequently panics and shows cowardliness, then he/she may not be able to sustain in day to day life.
Thirdly, teachers should not be at all partial. If a child is doing something wrong or proceeding through an evil path, there and there the act must be stopped. If this is not done at the correct time, the consequences in the upcoming future may be catastrophic. For example, nowadays, sinful acts like drinking and smoking are observed among children. If a child is identified of such acts, parents and teachers should take necessary actions to avoid such cases. If this is ignored, there may be manifestation of these evil entities and when seen in the professional world,the law may have to intervene leading to traumatic sufferings to the child as well as parents. Moreover, this should be implied to all the children, else this may provoke anger among each other and create inferior complexities.
To conclude, the best way to teach a child is to praise positive actions and identify and tend to eradicate the negative ones. If this is done at the proper time and till the proper age, certainly the child will turn out to be a considerate contributor to the society. If ignored, the ramifications may be troublesome and to some extent, disastrous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2572.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83458646617 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73231468871 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2038800931 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2592592593 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2962962963 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896277519472 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028930525585 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550441559564 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621212714991 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497680595174 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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