Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Character of society is formed by the character of men and women living in that society. People may emulate their idols but they cannot define the character of the whole society with just emulating their idols. Everyone has their own perception and thus their own heroes or heroines which they follow. These idols may be movie star, politician or a philanthropist. Irrespective of what they have done for the society doesn't define our societies character. These people may have there own characteristics which may not be coherent with everyone living in the society.
The paparazzis are always behind the famous people and their personal life and have many time related movie stars with scandlus which may be true or not be true. But the point is if they are true that doesn't mean that people liking that movie star have the same character as him. recently, salman khan hit and run case was given the verdict and he was given a clean chit in spite of the crime he has done. He has many fans and followers not only in india but also in other countries. That doesn't mean that people following him are have the same character and will do crimes as him.
Some famous personalities are drug addict. Recently, a news channel showed an Indian famous singer Honey singh being in a rehab centre because of his drug addiction. He has many fans who not only listen to his music ardently but also worship him. He has a huge fan base across India. Does this show that all his fan do drugs? no, they it does not. This shows that the character of the society does not depends on the character of the men and women they are following or consider their role model.
Another example is of the politicians who has been elected by the people as their leader. Suppose that political leader gets caught doing some unscrupulous work . Does it define the character of people who voted him? no. If a politician is corrupt it is because of his own character not because of the people who elected him. people who elected him may be conservative, good natured or soft hearted. It is not necessary that they have to be corrupt because the politician which they elected is corrupt and indulges in unscrupulous work.
From the above points it can easily be concluded that the character of the society cannot be determined by the character of the men and women that society chooses to be it's role model but is determined by the people living in that society. There may be heroes and heroines which are imitated by people but as a whole the character of the society is defined by the people living in it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.184210526316 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425101214575 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0789473684211 0.0444667217837 178% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.113360323887 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0465587044534 0.0406280797675 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40794004061 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00607287449393 0.030933414821 20% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103238866397 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222672064777 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242914979757 0.0148568991511 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2580.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 461.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59652928416 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297180043384 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190889370933 0.280924506359 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119305856833 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0867678958785 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40794004061 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 219.290929204 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412147505423 0.48968727796 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.4386990362 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0740740741 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1553840717 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0740740741 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.259259259259 0.674092028746 38% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 36.1630111673 51.4728631049 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.27814569536 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480613731078 0.391690518653 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130195577734 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105521003307 0.077325440228 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456667443394 0.547984918172 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191300564607 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152413204122 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154631431144 0.0892212321368 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347849469884 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0353421941177 0.0692045440612 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332922888995 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106151173917 0.0653680567796 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88274336283 307% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 13.0 2.70907079646 480% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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