Claim: The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The statement claims that In United states quality of political discourse is significantly weakened by emergence of online "blogoshere".because in United states there are many social media which basically reveals infomation of political partities and also reveals information about different political leaders.But main concern of this claims is that due to social media actual information about quality got decreased.After that In reason mentioned that when anyone puvlish political opinions easily because of that standard for covering news and political topics would unavoidably decline when people is concern about political opinion at that time information which is gathered by those social media actually revealed. but main weakness is that there are many confidentical information which should not be reveals on any social media site like facebook,twitter,instagram etc.so because this social media they actually make some sort of "blogosphere" means every people is posted review about political opinion this thing might lead to problem. In addition to that, Because of people democracy we can say people may publish what they want to publish on social media as review for political opinions, for example if there is election about to happened and all political partities got envolved themselves for campaigns and at that most people publish opinion about political leader so beacause of that standard of covering news and political topics will unavoidably decline. Seconally , we can say that because of that it also give impact on upcoming election of political party, for example in united state because of people rumors and wrong opinoins about president of united states which is publish on social media may create problem for president values, that values might be right or wrong. In statement mentioned that , whenanyone can publish political opionns easily , for covering news and political topic so we can say that because of enough democracy of people sometimes people publish their reviews for reveals actual identity of that political leader In sum,we can suggest that calims say that online blogosphere and social can significantly wakened quality of political discorse and also suggest better raeson for doing this proper in proper way.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69540229885 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45182297607 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451149425287 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 23.0359550562 300% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.056819425 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 396.4 118.986275619 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.6 23.4991977007 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.21951772744 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524002218953 0.243740707755 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.298070233697 0.0831039109588 359% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1290625016 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.524002218953 0.150359130593 349% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.2 14.1392134831 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.48 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.6 12.1743820225 268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.1639044944 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 67.0 11.8971910112 563% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 11.2143820225 264% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.