Nation is a region under the single control of authority. We often call it as government, whose responsibility to govern the people under the same region. Nation is widely known for its cities and development of those cities. Economic growth of nation is highly depend on the major cities. Ample amount of population is migrating from rural side to major cities and searching for the opportunities in flourishing industry.
Growing population demands for a great amount of requirements.In such a rapid development phase it is very difficult for local authorities to fulfill the requirements of population in major cities. Along with industrialization people give importance to their cultural values. People are imbibing their cultural values into the their families, successors. Their successors are going to preserve their culture. Government should also give its contribution to imbibe these traditional values in society.
To preserve these nation's cultural values people come together in a mean time from job and celebrate different traditional festivals. for example, In the city of Pune, India, Lokmanya Tilak started tradition festival Ganeshostav in the reverence of lord Ganesha. The purpose behind this is not only to pray to the god, but with this festival millions of people come together and celebrate this ten days festival. Another good example is Durga Pooja in Calcutta, India, which is a festival in the reverence of Durga Mata. The children get edified with traditions and moral values of nation. Not only these festivals but many other things having historical museums, preservation of ancient forts, temples etc are equally important to preserve the nation's traditional values.
With such rapid grown in the major cities it is Government's responsibility to make ensure that their major cities should receive the financial support they need.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302839116719 0.240241500013 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.13880126183 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107255520505 0.0880659088768 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0378548895899 0.0497285424764 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0410094637224 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1261829653 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0315457413249 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9244327275 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347003154574 0.030933414821 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0914826498423 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00630914826498 0.0249443105267 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00630914826498 0.0148568991511 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1870.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 290.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44827586207 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.427586206897 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306896551724 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227586206897 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155172413793 0.132149295362 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9244327275 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 57.4167184967 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0588235294 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7789350682 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.674092028746 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 47.7484787018 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.11594202899 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378193198218 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151925780101 0.123202303941 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.13637381195 0.077325440228 176% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520435407795 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137223822807 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141940191008 0.161403998019 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10017774293 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241704616796 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0522691877738 0.0692045440612 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294035592006 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12741668714 0.0653680567796 195% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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