Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claims is based.
Government plays vital role in countries development as well as in preservation and generate the cultural tradition. India is the multi-cultural country where different cultured people live together and the government of India works in progression of country without disturbing any cultural tradition. I agree with the claim that the government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive; but I am not agree with reason that it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural tradition are preserved and generated. I agree with the claim because the government provides financial support to any city than its duty of government to ensure that finances used for particular need or not, otherwise everyone tries to get money from government for their own personal benefits. I explained arguments based on reason of that claim in following paragraphs.
The government work for welfare of the society and nation's cultural tradition as well as work on modernization of the nation. Today the cultural tradition of the country get contentious in major cities and the people lived in major cities are so busy with their daily routine that they shorten their rituals. The actual and pure cultural tradition has seen in small cities and villages where people follow all rituals and traditional values. For example in India the people lived in villages celebrates 5 days festival Diwali but now in major cities it celebrates only one or two days because of less time. The government has to provide financial support to small cities to preserve cultural tradition.
Additionally, in metropolitan cities most of the people are migrants from other cities or countries who come for earn wealth and major cities are cocktail of different culture and people celebrate in the festivals and rituals according to time and money. For example, in India people are celebrate new year according to western culture where in Hindu’s culture the new year celebrated on Diwali but due to influence of other cultural tradition people loss their own cultural values, so the government has to save the tradition present in small cities and make it countries heritage.
Finally, The traditional medicinal practices still alive in small cities and get vanish from major cities. The traditional medicinal system effects slowly and in major cities people are in rash and they don't have time to rest so they use pathological treatment which work rapidly. The Ayurveda is heritage of India and people come from foreign countries to learn medicinal values. The government must provide financial support to small cities also to preserves such beautiful heritage.
Conclusively, On the basis of aforementioned arguments the government must ensure the financial supports but to preserve and generate the cultural tradition spend money on small cities also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 455, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...y need in order to thrive; but I am not agree with reason that it is primarily in cit...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...son that it is primarily in cities that a nations cultural tradition are preserved and ge...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rnment for their own personal benefits. I explained arguments based on reason of ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ajor cities people are in rash and they dont have time to rest so they use pathologi...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gn countries to learn medicinal values. The government must provide financial suppo...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l tradition spend money on small cities also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28758169935 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77386113729 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41394335512 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4521236735 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.764705882 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459268146761 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176172285226 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134885413493 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287417598628 0.150359130593 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860355931227 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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