Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Imagination and experience are not discrete concepts and the combination of both forms a successful character. Although relying on the unrestrained world of imaginations without any limitations and border of habits and attitudes may arrive some people at the conclusion of considering imagination more valuable than experience, I am a staunch supporter of experience and I believe imagination is a complementary factor of experience.
First and foremost, it is evident for all of the scientists and experts of every field that experience is hard to gain and it requires to work relentlessly. For example, arduous task of inventing light and its challenges never disappointed Edison and he never let multiple failures to falter his aim. Imagination is not sufficient in such cases where the people need to learn lessons from their experiences and do not repeat the same mistake. Instead, people who learn to alter their failures to steps for development and gaining experiences to probate new solutions are actually successful.
Following that, experiences are replete with details pragmatic solutions. When a person attends a workshop and starts to learn problem-solving by hands-on experience is much more valuable that imagining and dreaming about the impeccable solutions which may not even be accessible one day. Although experiences of an expert may contain restrictions caused by established habits through years, these habits and attitudes are results of several experiments that proved to be more practical than other unexamined paths. Perhaps, the only reason that the majority of enterprises are searching for skillful employees with at least 5 years of experience lies behind the fact that experiment is the only path to achieve success in the workforce.
On the contrary, the power of imagination is not concealed to anyone. Being creative and coming up with new ideas attracts the attention of business owners since new ideas are mostly involved with new technologies and undiscovered solutions by experienced workers. Additionally, innovation acts as the core source of knowledge in some fields such as the Arts. Artists, musicians, and painters who are deprived of innovation and they cannot think out of the box do not absorb the eyes of fans since people are searching for something different these days. An alternative example exists in the physics. If physicians like Einstein did not have the power of imagination, they would not be the iconoclast of their time.
To summarize, in this competitive world it is hard to distinguish and compare the influences of imagination and experience on people and things. However, considering imagination as a blue chip and more important than experience is a fallacious assumption. I think that experience consists of features that include advantages of being creative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...erience is hard to gain and it requires to work relentlessly. For example, arduous task...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, so, at least, for example, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3927765237 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12052726044 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553047404063 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3263149542 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.736842105 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301047792292 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833435148267 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830629399974 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177388837427 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10074801228 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.