Claim: importance of mutiple disciplinary eduaction is overated in recent times.
Reason:education should be focused on preparation for specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only persue a single area of study.
It is difficult to agree or disagree with the claim and the reason provided.
The reason on which this claim is based seems true at first.
If education is based on a specific branch of subject then the student will be able to focus more on his or her studies.
He or she will not get distracted by other subjects which are of his or her less interest.
As there will be lesser subjects as compared to the number of subjects he would have on choosing multidiscipline,
the student can score more marks in his field and grasp more knowledge. This way he can meet many more successes in life.
Single discipline also helps students in making their goals more clear.
As there will be fewer subjects so his aim will get more specific.
he won't be confused in his life in choosing the career path in the future.
He may also find some free time to get enhance his hobbies which are also important these days.
Apart from all this, what if the student is poor and is not financially stable to pursue a career in multidiscipline college? He will be at great loss.
Not only he will get less marks if he doesn't work hard but also waste his money.
However, there are also some advantages if a student gets a multidisciplinary education. Only a few people know what they want to become in life,
rest struggle to find their interest. Having multi discipline will help a student in exploring various subjects and finding his interest.
If education is focused on a specific career path then the person will not be able to change his career path in his or her future.
That subject will be fixed for his entire career and if he tries to do it then before that he has to learn every aspect of that other subject.
Therefore, there are both advantages and disadvantages of multidiscipline education.
It should be left to the student an option of choosing the eduction type.
After all it is the student who has to struggle with any type of education.
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| 2019-08-08 | anubhuti puppalwar | 50 | view |
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...n option of choosing the eduction type. After all it is the student who has to strugg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, after all, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61363636364 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57580701267 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474431818182 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3776545048 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184821962582 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645416406737 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574817164566 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687985994293 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588584873952 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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