College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Colleges exist to develop our knowledge in particular filed in order for us to be prepared to work and get our dream job. When students apply to a specific degree in college, they have to follow a plan of courses in order to graduate some of these courses are not dull but students should take them to prove that they can perform will in their future career.
To prepare student to for future career, it is not enough for them to just take the courses that they like but they must take some specific courses, which might be not interesting for the most of the students, in order for them acquire the fundamental knowledge for their career. For example, if a student want to an Electrical Engineering that specialized in communication, the students should take courses that related to his specialty such as signal analysis or digital signal processing courses. These courses even if they are not interesting to the most of the students, they have to be taken to receive the degree and to be able to get a job in communication companies after graduation.
Life is not easy and sometimes we have to be out of our comfort zone to learn and progress in our education and life in general. College students tend to struggle with mathematics courses, but for most of the science degrees, students are required to take mathematics in order for them to pass the primary year. Therefore, students will not always have the ability to choose they want to pass specific degree. Moreover, some students are afraid from courses such as mathematics and physics, but when they take them, they stare to like them. Therefore, for some it is a matter of breaking the stigma of hard courses.
In conclusion, college students should take some courses that might be dull to be successful in their future career. Moreover, students will still be able to take the courses that they interested in but within a limit base on their academic plan.
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74107142857 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57774349974 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5881116965 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.21951772744 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247251563446 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108999923681 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617311403516 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18488330566 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316008523232 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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