College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Student life is golden life. This is very important time to make the aim. In many cases students unable to make their aim.In recent practices, students choose their field of interest themselves, however to make their life fruitful, they should take the suggestion from their elders. I agree with this issue that states students should have choose their field of interest rather than job based study. I feel this way for some reasons: to achieve the goal, to develop the nation, and to produce the peace and harmony.
To begin with, nowadays world attracted towards the money. Almost all this new generation want to make the hipsters. They want to earn money. Perhaps they do not have enough knowledge about the future aim. But in fact, many students wants to make their golden future by using the good way of their choice but in fact, they have disturbance in their way. We can take one example, Charles Darwin, his family wanted to made different aim but he was interested towards the nature. Finally, he got his success and becomes well known person in this world from his contribution of Biology.
Secondly, in order to develop the whole nation quickly and easily, good manpower is needed. To fulfilled this purpose, fervid kinds of person is needed. If anyone want to be a doctor, who should have the interest and enthusiasm towards this field. Without deep interest nothing is possible. Forceful kind of study brings irritation towards the children and nation development is impossible.
Finally, to make the society peaceful and harmonious, similar types of opinions is needed, which only come from the well successful persons.Society consists of different types of persons, to reconcile them good sociologist is needed which come from own interest of the student. Moreover, job makes the mind dull, no any creativity is produced. That type of education produce selfish and non interested manpower, which is not fruitful for this present world.
To recapitulate, adroit person will produce from interested field of study. Only narrow minded person and society is formed from the job based study. Students should have to choose the subject of their own interested, which helps to develop the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, in fact, kind of, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05205479452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47434424309 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1275215625 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1739130435 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121139412303 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345293442766 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474930549673 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725519429305 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334622840007 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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