To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The issue topic emphasizes that major cities are appropriate to study the characteristic of the society. Society consists of the different languages, cultures, customs, and different religions. City contains almost all population of the country; however, it is not guarantee that it represents all of the culture of the country. I feel this for some major reasons: representation, importance of history, and to conserved culture.
To begin with, in our city, Kathmandu, there are different religions and culture are available. For instance, Newari, Bojpuri, Maithili, and Brahamin. They have separate customs. In order to take the knowledge from these caste, it is possible that we can take the whole information from this city; whereas, if, you want to know about the culture of the Route (they lived in the forest of the Nepal), it is impossible from the Kathmandu city. Hence, Nepalese society characteristics don't reflect from the major city.
In addition, to find out the importance of the religion, it is needed to study the whole parts of the country. Major city is favorable for aristocratic family. It is totally not suitable for the middle class family. Society characteristics depends upon the both city and village as well. Equal emphasizes is required for middle and higher class family.
Finally, to protect the history of the characteristics of society, careful scrutiny of the past evidence is needed. We can gain more knowledge from whole country. People are centralized in the city but culture is not. Languages are also can be centralized but not all regions. For example, Pokhara is also major city of the Nepal but it contains only similar kinds of the caste and peoples.
To recapitulate, in order to find out the characteristics of the society, details study of the country is needed. Major cities are not provide sufficient factor of the the properties of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
... it is not guarantee that it represents all of the culture of the country. I feel this for...
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Message: Did you mean 'this caste' or 'these castes'?
Suggestion: this caste; these castes
...ms. In order to take the knowledge from these caste, it is possible that we can take the wh...
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Suggestion: don't
...Hence, Nepalese society characteristics dont reflect from the major city. In additi...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...country is needed. Major cities are not provide sufficient factor of the the properties...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...es are not provide sufficient factor of the the properties of the society.
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...es are not provide sufficient factor of the the properties of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93372077179 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3530666923 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5238095238 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168233993267 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546919722241 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699286879161 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11246892053 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637999075123 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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