Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The necessity for the students to spend at least one semester is not untaxing.Actually,choosing the best country to study for at least one semester for the students’ is not a trifling issue. To make the best decision students’ should make deliberate thinking.This prompt recommends Students are demanded to go some other countries to experience and glean the information and knowledge rather than studying all the semesters in the same college.In my opinion,I am strongly consonant with suggestions and argue that colleges and universities should recommend the best country having best ranking universities to aid their pragamatic and theoretical knowledge as well for two reasons.
To begin, Knowledge plays a imperative roles in todays era.The most primacy part plays in today’s world is practical knowledge.Students actually are burgeoning and mind seems to be supple.In addition to,if they afford to do something best they come up by sharpening out them.If the universities and colleges demanded the students to spend like more than a semesters studying in foreign country; it will bolster their knowledge and level. For instance,If we practically do the experiment over total students of class and divide the students;and if we sent the half students to foreign country for like one semester and other half letting them studying in same University.what we might observe? Probably, after the end of semester when we observe two group of students we might notice that,students’ who went to foreign country seems to be more active,plucky and more knowledgable and more importantly more interactive and that alacrity to do anything, On the other hand, Half of the students might seemed too dessicated, clumsy,dispassionate and diffident.The above example illustrates that,Challenging the students something new and letting them facing the challenges with gusto can enrich their knowledge either practical or theoretical.
Further,notwithstanding every universities and collegese may not require the same kind of criteria yet it is fruitful for colleges as well as for students to rank out one of the best university: the performance and overall improvement of students in academic skills,practical skills to vie in different incisive programs organized nationally and internationally . For instance, Purna Kharel who is the CEO of US based company named K&A (Kharel and Associates),which is the best place to work for an Electrical Engineers here in Nepal; which has provided many job opportunities to Neplese and help to uplift their status.This is all because he enriched his knowledge theoretically as well as practically through series of study plan in Nepal and U.S. eventhough college had not demanded that.From above example, it states that knowledge is the most pussiant thing in the whole universe.Even if , the colleges and universities have not demanded the criteria for study in foreign country;It is best to take that decision.
Of course, some argue that students can enrich their knowledge by making research staying and studying in same universities;sounds a kind of convencing .However studying all semesters in same college and making research by their own interest may not be something new and challenging for students and deprived of bunches of ideas which they can grab when they meet the equally competent students arriving from different parts of world.For the above reason,It is best that colleges and universities are demanding their students to study for at least one semester in foreign country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, so, well, as for, at least, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2989.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47435897436 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44051764654 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479853479853 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 916.2 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.478196095 60.3974514979 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 373.625 118.986275619 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 23.4991977007 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.375 5.21951772744 352% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318391699149 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166398796642 0.0831039109588 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077620390645 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223607924328 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664603535634 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.5 14.1392134831 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 48.8420337079 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.