The installation of a new company in a city is always a situation that raises discussion within the local community. There might be people that look it in a positive way and others that disagree with the idea. When it comes to a situation where a big factory might be constructed in my community I would probably support the idea, since it will generate jobs and create a better economical dynamic to the city.
One can argue that factories near a community would generate only problems to inhabitants. In general, the idea that people has about industries is that it explores employees and it is not health to natural resources from that place. In this sense, there is a perspective that industrial sector only brings bad aspects to a certain place generating a sentiment that factories are not welcome to be constructed near communities.
However, this perspective is based only in bad experiences related to this kind of business. Factories represents a good possibility to create jobs in a community. In many occasions, these companies need a certain type of ability from employees that is hard to find among community member. In this scenario, good companies tend to teach local people how to deal with certain types of technology that is necessary in order to work inside the factory. In this context, companies will not only bring jobs for a community but also know-how to inhabitants. Schools and local universities can have benefits from that since they might be able to develop laboratories and other spaces where students might learn and do internships from it. In these sense, a factory could represent jobs and knowledge to the community.
Moreover, the community might develop a good economical dynamic. A city that receives a large factory could have an increase in the number of other companies that has a business related to that industry. This aspect helps community to develop other activities that allow the city to become less dependent from that industry. In this sense, that could be created a work environment that is diversified, helping the city to have an interesting dynamic. For example, if a factory that construct cars would be constructed near my community, probably this means that many other firms would be present here, which is something I find interesting for the community as a whole.
When it comes to aspects such as the quality of the jobs or how concerned is the company to aspects such as environmental impacts, it’s necessary to consider that government and society are the better agents to supervise this kind of aspects. In this sense, everybody from the community would pay attention to the activities of the company and if the firm didn’t have compromise to the society and the nature surround it, certainly community would be able to stand against mistaken interest.
In conclusion, one can see only negative aspects in a construction of a factory next to a community. However, I do believe that it’s possible to have many benefits from this kind of business, such as increase in jobs, discovery of certain types of knowledge and improvement in the economical dynamics of the community. Certainly, society and government would work together in order to avoid mistaken conducts by the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ity. There might be people that look it in a positive way and others that disagree with the idea....
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry in order to work inside the factory. In this context, companies will not only b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 13.6137724551 206% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 28.8173652695 177% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 55.5748502994 149% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2730.0 2260.96107784 121% => OK
No of words: 542.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.036900369 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86665522467 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 204.123752495 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413284132841 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 886.5 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.22255489022 237% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.229915549 57.8364921388 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.695652174 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5652173913 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16776406355 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058181704495 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426976068469 0.0701772020484 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976584236598 0.128457276422 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236526749059 0.0628817314937 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.