"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
In order to survive corporations need money, but this doesn't mean that it can be a detriment to the society in which it operates to maximize its profits. A corporation can aim to make largest profits but it must be sure that it doesn't cause any kind of harm to the society in which it functions.
However, when a corporation desires to maximize its profits it will try all the ways to do so, hence the general welfare of nation would definitely be at risk. It is definitely difficult for a corporation to maximize its profits by also simultaneously developing the nation as it has to sacrifice many factors with respect to the welfare of the nation to make a humongous amount of profit.
On the contrary if the corporations work for the well-being of the society it is actually beneficial for them in many ways. One of these is making the workplace environment comfortable for the workers so as to extract a good amount of work from the workers which would in turn definitely increase their profits. One more way is that if the corporation is beneficial even to people living around in any ways they would also be as a moral support and hence would in turn help the corporations to gain more profits. Another way is to offer more offers for employment which would encourage the unemployed to join the organisation, hence would also increase in workforce and would in turn help in maximizing the profits.
Hence, a corporation should always work for the well-being of the nation instead of aiming for increasing in profits as the well-being of nation would in turn help in the well-being of the corporation, and would also result in a good amount of profit.
Therefore, I would accept with the above given statement that "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflicts with the general welfare of the nation at large".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the largest'.
Suggestion: make the largest
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...environment comfortable for the workers so as to extract a good amount of work from the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, kind of, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79439252336 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84491057384 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420560747664 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7645336261 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.9 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203304501834 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103089620886 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105636308179 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15782988084 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125895465263 0.0667264976115 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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