The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
The corporations are final layer of the society. They are the one who create the demand and they come with the easy solution to full-fill the demand as a supply and earn money. This is how they expand their reach. These corporations only aim to business with the general people, sometimes they even lack basic human values and ethics for their blind success or happiness
On the other hand the general welfare affects badly. It is said that the development and evolution is the main cause of losing the human ethics and values. In the name of development and success the people are tending towards fake behaviour, relationships, etc. The people are in a blind belief that they are gaining in development. Ironically it's not in that way. We ourselves are degrading ourselves in the name of development.
The corporations are the cause for this fall. I strongly support the argument and would like to take this disgraced behaviour to each and every one 's notice. One should try to rectify by our mistakes and should come up in a positive attitude, and not being in false imagination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... are gaining in development. Ironically its not in that way. We ourselves are degra...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...ike to take this disgraced behaviour to each and every one s notice. One should try to rectify by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 2260.96107784 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 441.139720559 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77659574468 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65151971764 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 204.123752495 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 705.55239521 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1372793531 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.70786347227 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10891049987 0.218282227539 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315131692494 0.0743258471296 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494088117451 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632413277834 0.128457276422 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421254982878 0.0628817314937 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.3799401198 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 98.500998004 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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