Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and suppo

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Suggestion: Education
...ence and not to tell them what to think.Education builds critical and rational thinking w...
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...h enhances their decision-making skills.These skills helps them to think what is righ...
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...eir decision-making skills.These skills helps them to think what is right and wrong f...
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... think what is right and wrong for them.Hence,educational institutions should not dis...
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...k what is right and wrong for them.Hence,educational institutions should not dissuade any fi...
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...ld a strong foundation for the students.Children should be taught how they should be tot...
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... be totally determined towards the goal.They should be taught how to handle a situat...
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...aught how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and t...
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...ght how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and that ...
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...ght how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and that ...
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...hat any bad situation is an opportunity.They should never teach a child what to thin...
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...should never teach a child what to think,instead how to think should be the motive.There...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...stead how to think should be the motive.Therefore,The motive of an educational institutio...
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... to think should be the motive.Therefore,The motive of an educational institution is...
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...ach children how to tackle the situation,rather than running from them. Each child ha...
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...child has its own interests and choices.Some students may like arts and some people ...
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...e arts and some people may like science.In order to let them seek their interests,...
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...n order to let them seek their interests,they should be explored to every field possi...
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...uld be explored to every field possible.This will provide them a platform to determi...
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...etermine their strengths and weaknesses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds ...
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Suggestion: , knowledge
... their strengths and weaknesses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds technology...
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...esses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds technology more interesting b...
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...e interesting but have also studied arts,he can combine both the knowledge to produ...
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...e knowledge to produce something better.This enhances their creativity and thinking ...
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...s their creativity and thinking ability.Hence,each one should get exposure to various...
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...ir creativity and thinking ability.Hence,each one should get exposure to various diff...
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...et exposure to various different fields.In my opinion,if a child has determination...
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...o various different fields.In my opinion,if a child has determination,perseverance ...
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... my opinion,if a child has determination,perseverance and interest in that field which are th...
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...field which are the pillars of education,he achieve everything with hard work. Mo...
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...d which are the pillars of education,he achieve everything with hard work. Moreover,t...
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...ve everything with hard work. Moreover,the educational institution can dissuade st...
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... of study in which there is a high risk.For instance,if a child wants to pursue art...
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... which there is a high risk.For instance,if a child wants to pursue art which invol...
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...ch involves dark fiction or black magic.It may affect the child in its behaviour.I...
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...t may affect the child in its behaviour.It can also lead to something unhealthy an...
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... unhealthy and may cause harm to others.This can influence his mind and can make him...
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... can make him commit an offensive crime.Hence,it institutes should take care of the f...
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...make him commit an offensive crime.Hence,it institutes should take care of the fiel...
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...ds students wants to pursue. Therefore,An educational institution should help the...
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...itically and impart good values on them.In this way, they will provide students a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64247311828 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84109120878 2.79657885939 137% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545698924731 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 23.0359550562 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.186552817 60.3974514979 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 349.833333333 118.986275619 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 23.4991977007 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 5.21951772744 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18124101153 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092222525974 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469083000461 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104366919665 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363520110493 0.0667264976115 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.1 14.1392134831 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 48.8420337079 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 12.1743820225 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.32 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 11.2143820225 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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