Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Education forms the base of a human being.Education is considered to be the most important part of the life.Educational institutions provide the driving force behind a successful person.Education helps a man to think logically and act rationally.Around the world Educational institutions are considered as assets.
Educational institutions have a big responsibility of showing the path of success to every learners.I completely disagree with the idea of dissuading students who are unlikely to succeed in any path.Educational institutions with all their knowledge and resources should help in overall development of a man.They should guide a student to their path of interest and should not demotivate them.
Success and failure are part of any learning.It has been said by Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam that a person can truly succeed only after failures.Even the most successful persons have at one point of time committed mistakes.No matter how learned man we are,we are nobody to judge anyone.Michael Jordan was kicked out of the high school basketball team but now he is one of the top basketball player.
We have noticed that most of the students have a repugnant towards history or geography and they score low.By seeing these low scores will educational institutions stop them learning these subjects?without geography or history a student's educational is incomplete.Educational Institutions should try to create a overall package.Many students in India cannot study due to poverty.Instaed of studying and playing,they are mostly seen working for their living.
Success is defined differently for different persons.For some it means a rich house and lifestyle while for some it might be reaching the peak of their creativity.Many students have the capability to become a architect or fashion designer but due to lack of money they do not succeed.
It should be the duty of educational institutions to encourage their talent while maintaing the base of their learnings.Thus they should not dissuade the students but provide a platform for any student to shine and grow up as a good human being.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24269005848 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.201754385965 0.157235817809 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847953216374 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409356725146 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114035087719 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0406280797675 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.51410636736 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350877192982 0.030933414821 113% => OK
Particles: 0.00292397660819 0.0016655270985 176% => OK
Determiners: 0.114035087719 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0292397660819 0.0249443105267 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00584795321637 0.0148568991511 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 329.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38601823708 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373860182371 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303951367781 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224924012158 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173252279635 0.132149295362 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51410636736 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 61.2059059282 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 54.8333333333 23.380412469 235% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 72.584816288 59.4972553346 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 350.166666667 141.124799967 248% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8333333333 23.380412469 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.21349557522 518% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 85.2284701114 51.4728631049 166% => OK
Elegance: 1.38235294118 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377222770634 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186470329311 0.123202303941 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0451047658851 0.077325440228 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.39835584667e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224094968689 0.161403998019 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640169848905 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241958321213 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0534676681139 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224094968689 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640169848905 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.