The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
A leader is a representative of a society who is elected by the people. A leader's responsibility is to listen to the demands
of the citizens, analyze as to what is required and fulfill them accordingly. It is the charisma and honesty towards its
work that prove its effectiveness. The effectiveness of the leadership can be measured by the success of the nation, the
employment opportunities but the best way is to examine the well-being of the citizens.
During elections, it is usually observed that the politicians are pitted against each other to gain votes from people.
They try to extract evidences from the past of the opposition to break the vote bank of the party. The leaders promise
its voters to bring joy and fulfill all the demands required. But often we see, the politicians right after they are
appointed run away from the promises and focus on their personal demands. What if the leader's are not concerned with the
well-being of the citizens? If the leaders are only concerned about their personal growth and forget about the promises
made to the citizens, it will only lead to an uproar and dissatisfaction among the people. Such leaders fail to give
recognition to the nation and the effectiveness of leadership droops down to zero.
Even if the leaders are concerned with nations success but at the cost of well-being of citizens, will it ensure the leader
is effective? This could lead to an imbalance. The nation's economy and it's relation with other countries might be
booming, but the nation is plagued with riots, poverty; low quality education and the basic needs not being listened to.
Such scenarios could affect the effectiveness of the leaders.
A leader is supposed to listen to the needs of every class and sections of the society. One of the best examples of
a strong leadership effectiveness is of M.K Gandhi. Gandhi took the responsibility of making sure India gets independence
and gave people the direction they needed. Along with the independence with non-violence, he erased the distinction of
class among people. He did not turn a blind eye towards the lower caste but made sure each and everyone's demand is
being fulfilled. He removed the concept of untouchability and gave an entirely new meaning to the society. Not only
he made an effort to contribute at national level but also he focused on things where common people were suffered.
Thus, the leaders are elected with the hope of bringing success to the society but not at the expense of welfare of the
people. The leaders are effective when the nation is progressing towards development and the well-being of the citizens
is ensured. But the true effectiveness can only be measured when there is peace and harmony among the citizens.
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...asured by the success of the nation, the employment opportunities but the best wa...
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...nal growth and forget about the promises made to the citizens, it will only lead ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.174 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.044 0.0880659088768 50% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.034 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.048 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8662715497 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.04 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.002 0.0016655270985 120% => OK
Determiners: 0.148 0.0997080785238 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2767.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 464.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96336206897 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340517241379 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278017241379 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172413793103 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118534482759 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8662715497 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45474137931 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.8469025084 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.56 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.670336786 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.68 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.56 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.32 0.674092028746 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.94800884956 485% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.3617241379 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.67741935484 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436494344621 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12222131079 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0683694393846 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.693381259551 0.547984918172 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.259534134751 0.149214159877 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209387617678 0.161403998019 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117636644756 0.0892212321368 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.237144779161 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110496095049 0.0692045440612 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218183116223 0.275328986314 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110003769073 0.0653680567796 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.