The emergence of the online blogosphere and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
Blog and social media network has become most important in today's life. People would easily read information on them. Author is trying to say blogs and social media made the low quality of political discourse in the United States. I completely desagree with author's statement. There are reasons of disagreement.
Actually, blog and social media gives us remarkable information in very short time. For example, we can watch all political party's actions, moves and reviews and many other related to politics at anywhere anytime. So it is good for political party, and we can trust them because of their significant work and effort of changing the country.
Politics is most significant for us. We choose our leader to help out in the trouble and we have to understand all the circumstances, while selecting our leader.
Internet makes easier for acquiring information about our leader and his/her political discourse. This makes them more stronger and political party will start taking interest in their people's life. If any leader make egregeous mistakes in his/her life, it will be easily shown on the internet in short time of span. Hence political parties would be taken care of silly mistakes and they would work for development of country.
In every country, there are many different political parties and apart from them, we have to choose perfect one, who is better for us. Problem comes there, so we can view his/her discourse on social media or read the blog. We can also asking for any kind of assistance. Good political leader makes you feel comfortable and imidiately he would try to solve our problems. So it is good, within two or three days our problem will be solved by using social media and blog.
There is one biggest problem of blogshere and social media. Some people love to make false statement to harm the political discourse. It is minor problem, because most of people aware of good things about political party and they will not read negative side. We could also delete or remove this kind of information from blog and social media, so this problem is not a big deal. Sometimes for minor problem, we can not stop to use good things. We should have to change it as soon as possible.
Political discourse is made for developing the country. So it should be necessary to reach at every people. Every people should know about the good political leader and choose them wisely. He/She is the one who will help us in our problem for next some years. In this topic, social media and blogshere helps us and makes political discourse more stronger not weaken.
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...nt. There are reasons of disagreement. Actually, blog and social media gives us...
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...would work for development of country. In every country, there are many differe...
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... helps us and makes political discourse more stronger not weaken.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in short', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20987654321 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.152263374486 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125514403292 0.0880659088768 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514403292181 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0802469135802 0.0444667217837 180% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0308641975309 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45390870377 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.022633744856 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00205761316872 0.0016655270985 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.0473251028807 0.0997080785238 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.037037037037 0.0249443105267 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00411522633745 0.0148568991511 28% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2627.0 2732.02544248 96% => OK
No of words: 441.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95691609977 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335600907029 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224489795918 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160997732426 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45390870377 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469387755102 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.0069285686 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6194690265 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7 23.380412469 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7521272977 59.4972553346 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5666666667 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 23.380412469 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.1489795918 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.23913043478 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360164258445 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0814062193843 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.075678297092 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449018520856 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13884316443 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114691372033 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106608315939 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281896137193 0.385218514788 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0864115703315 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240277719721 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853607811763 0.0653680567796 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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