Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The assertion that "Scandals are useful because the focus our attention on problems in way that no speaker or reformer ever could" is controversial one. On one other hand scandals comes out are very assential for people of nation and for nation also. On other hand, many people aware from the strict rule that's why are people are scare from the rule made for nation, in the analysis of the topic the author is wrong .
Firstly the main point of the author contains that, scandal are assential for people to learn and get the attention on problem in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. To stop the scandal and get the attention of the people nation has to make a strict rule for every one. Now in the India large courancy has cancelled for stop the scandal. This is not right thing to get the attention of people scandal are doing or will doing. To stop the the scandal nation has to bring policies like every transaction of money will be in cheque and other policies should like every person have to pay the tax if he not pay tax they will be punish.
Secondly the author has state another thing, "scandal are useful because they attention on problem in ways that no speaker ever could" that's perfectly right but, way to get attention of people and stop the people to doing scandal is wrong. Scandal is occur in every country but in some country many scandal are occur and in some country exceed scandal are occur than some country, but some county has a strict rule and some have poor rule. To stop scandal people have to understand. No anyone can stop the scandal, Scandal can stop or decrease its effect it totally on upto you nothing do any can in this matter.This is right wheather the people get attention on scandal and then people do less scandal. Hence effect of this on people is positive but, this not right thing to protest
To concludes that,this is right wheather the people get attention on scandal and then people do less scandal. Hence effect of this on people is positive but, this not right thing to protest. However people will do scandal after some time of previous scandal occur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, another thing, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61417322835 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28676571658 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383202099738 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3854522391 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181320090984 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815027934971 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861485991069 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124942439579 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391162097048 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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