Self-knowledge is one step towards the walk of eternity.Self-knowledge is understanding one's morality and flaws in his own character.To understand flaws in his own character is very difficult with having pride. Thus I completely agree with the author that the first step to knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Firstly to gain self-knowledge one have to give up their pride. Leaving back their ego is something which next to impossible for most of the people.It is important for the person to give up the feeling that he is something because without that he won't be able to accept the flaws which persists in his soul. Let's take a hypothetical situation if a well-educated person wants to gain self-knowledge.He starts learning about the flaws in his soul. He reads that he should not be egoistic.Then his mind will not make his accept that he is egoistic saying he is just having a self-respect. Thus he won't be able to give up his ego
So to attain self-knowlege that person should do meditation to concentrate on the path is going to follow.Self-knowledge can never be attain by person who is surrounded by people who don't have self-knowledge because that people will know make him do follow that path.So that person need to first stop listening to his dear ones and blindly follow the path.
Thus, I believe that to attain self-knowledge the first step is to reject what is familiar.He need to give his knowledge which he gain from the outside world and most importantly his pride which is major obstacle to attain self-knowledge.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19926199262 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.225092250923 0.157235817809 143% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0885608856089 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0516605166052 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0848708487085 0.0444667217837 191% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107011070111 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0332103321033 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.34701270197 2.79330140395 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0627306273063 0.030933414821 203% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0147601476015 0.0016655270985 886% => OK
Determiners: 0.0664206642066 0.0997080785238 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221402214022 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0258302583026 0.0148568991511 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1689.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 262.0 452.878318584 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4465648855 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290076335878 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19465648855 0.280924506359 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152671755725 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13358778626 0.132149295362 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34701270197 2.79330140395 120% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 219.290929204 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484732824427 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 45.5447470583 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.75 23.380412469 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.120104886 59.4972553346 185% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.125 141.124799967 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 23.380412469 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.674092028746 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.21349557522 441% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.215648855 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 0.938775510204 1.64882698954 57% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528512887016 0.391690518653 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186380095592 0.123202303941 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0807595897276 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.685407536458 0.547984918172 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.218929040884 0.149214159877 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.311454581356 0.161403998019 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183789292267 0.0892212321368 206% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357432427935 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0191601798904 0.0692045440612 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407645903205 0.275328986314 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136645429062 0.0653680567796 209% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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