The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
self-knowledge is one's ability to know and understand materials and concepts, whether familiar or obscure. it is practically impossible for an individual to become aware of new things and innovative ideas without taking into account old ideas and familiar concepts thame came before. therefore, in contract to the statement that declares that the best way to self-knowledge is the rejection of the familiar, I consider that knowing of familiar things, regardless what they are, is the best way to fathom new ideas and even use them in order to develop original strategies and processes.
self-knowledge is more than just coming to know and comprehend things that aren't familiar to an individuals, it is about one's ability to analyze and even apply those things in terms of previous things that one already knows. this arises from the concept that "new ideas arises from old ones". therefore, rejection of familiar might hnder our ability to progress, to understand, to analyze and to develop and hence, diminishing the concept of what we call "self knowledge". In fact, the things that we call "familiar" or even "frivolous" are essential aspects to progress and development because from those things arise new and even more advanced ideas, strategies and procedures. take into account "newton"strategy to develop the hypothesis of relativity. the strategy involves newton's saying "why does this apple fall down and does not go up". From this ludicrous and familiar, newton became one of the most venerable physicistin history.
Another important aspect that refutes the statement and supports the idea that "self knowledge arises from the familiar" is the fact that many years of studies are required for an individual to develop the ability to self-understand and analyze things on his own. For instance, every undergraduate college program requires its students to become familiar of the program by memorizing all the necessary concepts and aspects required before entering into graduate school where the student is expected to take into account all the information acquired from the undergraduate studies and therefore, to develop his own ideas, his own research and even his own ability to understand and analyze independently and coherently.
In conclusion, self-knowledge cannot be described by a simple word. In fact, it arises from various new and old ideas to understand what it means for an individual to become self-knowledgable. However, in any aspect of self-kowledge, rejecting every idea that came before, does not aknowledge self-knowledge; on the contrary, it hinders it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54166666667 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4242283822 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.877834779 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.733333333 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114939665239 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518872510512 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312559026333 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859830918746 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200463286492 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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