Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The above topic emphasizes on the idea whether the government should solve the immediate problems or it should try to solve the
problems which will occur in near future. I believe that the government should solve the anticipated problems of the future as it
will allow the government to properly plan and draft the solution of the problems. This will have great advantage to the upcoming
generations as the problems would be solved by then. If the government tries to solve the immediate problems, the work will be done
in haste and so the quality of the work won't be at par and it would require repairs in a short period of time which will consume
more budget than required.
Firstly, if the government decides to pay more attention to the problems occuring in future it will give them plethora of time to
plan the solution and test the solution before actually implementing it. This will ensure the quality of the work and no extra
maintenance cost will be incorporated.For example, in early 2000's in India traffic became a hot topic and because of it traffic
management became significant. At that time,the ruling party,i.e,BJP led by Atal Bihari Vajpayee were myopic and thought of building
flyovers which woud reduce the traffic by a great extent. The then ruling party thought for the future of India because of which
today the traffic is cut by a great extent.
Secondly, it will be of great help for the new generation children as most of their problems would be solved in advance.It will allow
them live a happy and a peaceful life as the problems which were serious issues for their as ancestors wouldn't be for them.For
example the invention of semi-automatic cars has made driving very simple which was a tedious task for long drives. It is now easy
for the new generation kids to drive a car for a long distance as requires very less to be controlled manually,most of the work is
automatic. Further research is going on automatic cars which will be of great help for the next generation coming up.That is why it
is necessary to optimize the solutions and make solutions better as the year progresses
The government should solve some of the immediate problems like it should make sure there are no potholes on the road before rainy
season arrives.It should take into consideration such problems and solve it immediately.But it is of utmost importance to foresee the
problems of near future and solve it with proper planning so that it allows the development of the overall country and brings peace
to the life of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93650793651 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69102630514 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462585034014 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.319558593 60.3974514979 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.909090909 118.986275619 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0909090909 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 7.80617977528 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263836496368 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124600124542 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106707897459 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896832082498 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100238765244 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 14.1392134831 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.