Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The above topic emphasizes on the idea that scandals are useful because it brings into observation various kinds of probelms which a
speaker or a reformer or an expert couldn't. In the past decade the rate of scandals has skyrocketed and has lead to severe problems
in the society.I believe that the above statement is incorrect as it could lead to miserable issues and hamper the funcionality of
the society. it would have harsh effects on the life of poor people and also have detrimental effects on the economy of the country
and also people will start loosing faith from the society if scandals happen.
Firstly, I believe that if scandals happen then it will stumble the functionality of the society. The things won't go with ease as
there will be harsh effect on the economy. it will have a very bad effect on poor people who struggle for two meals a day. Consider
the example of Vijay Mallya, he looted thousands of crores of rupees from various banks which lead to a very uneven situation in the
country.The money which he looted was many people's life time saving. The bankers weren't getting salary on time because of that scam
so they started strinking and the banks were shut down for a week or so. so one scandal leads to an overall disturbance in the
country and creates big problems.
Secondly, because of scandals people start loosing faith in the society . there are many scams related to the admissions in colleges
and making forged cerificates. because of these scandals a deserving candidate doesn't get the facilities he should get. it
endgenders a feeling of hatred which further hampers the candidates performance. Economic scandals has severe effects which aren't
ephermal and takes a long time for recovery because of which the country could loose it's position at global level.
I believe that scandals focuses once attention to the problems but regular scandals of similar type are harmful to the society and
poses harsh effects on the economy and the people. Rather strict actions should be taken against those who are indulged in scandals
which will rise the hope of the people and lead to the betterment of the society and lead to the overall development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07957559682 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49619541975 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506631299735 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9305735591 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 7.80617977528 564% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182674045728 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606793700352 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446562741674 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589489746397 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410535084154 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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