Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ing in infrastructure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of g...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ure, etc. In the more economical terms, its a countrys GDP and rate of growth per y...
^^^
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... economic development, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in di...
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Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment, like arts, sports , etc are looked after differently in different countries...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... how strong these other pillars are. Lets take for example a small country like I...
^^^^
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... investment will cast serious doubts on governments inability to priortize the right vertic...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...iding safe lands for its citizen. In contrast a developed country like USA, which has...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...This is not because that their military doesnt require any investment but because of t...
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Line 7, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oping country will take time to build up . Since America has strong foothold in th...
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Line 7, column 800, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... is expected than a developing country. However this investment shall still not be the ...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ion out the major verticals in countrys economical development and list our major and mino...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 650.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82872984255 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466153846154 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1040.4 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3211455316 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.47826087 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2608695652 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147412527167 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055305301614 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415133821891 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11184669275 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478038725523 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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