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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'quantity'?
Suggestion: quantity
...lives, thereby making available a large quantities of information to be available at dispo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e have zillions of bytes being consumed everyday via web, but also we have various other...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1048, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...es to build his focus and fundamentals. Similarly in the places where internet is still n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... has given a lot of options to consumers , where they have been able to choose the...
^^
Line 3, column 1408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...gh this large set and focussing on only whats rudimentary. Backing up our claim on...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ocussing on what their wants are. As a ever-evolving species, we are always pr...
^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'choice'?
Suggestion: choice
...s. Even when presented with a disparate choices, our minds have been capable enough to ...
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Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing. In all our instincts our growing up ,we have made clear choices in processing...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3119.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 631.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94294770206 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01195704033 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78042979364 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48177496038 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 996.3 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7545710359 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.608695652 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4347826087 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260333882216 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754619641145 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039391852705 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137899627777 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047046935843 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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