"Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society."Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely alig

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... fledglings learn about moral principles , others tend to believe that morality is...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'insight'?
Suggestion: insight
... stemmed out while developing a logical insights. Surely its a good moot point as the c...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e developing a logical insights. Surely its a good moot point as the child may or ...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l insights. Surely its a good moot point as the child may or may not have both , ...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t as the child may or may not have both , given he has to face the stand of solvi...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ous young mind shall be able to imbibe, a it doesnt take it into the account the ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'it'?
Suggestion: a; it
...ous young mind shall be able to imbibe, a it doesnt take it into the account the stu...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...oung mind shall be able to imbibe, a it doesnt take it into the account the student wh...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ven the stress on equal education on all , it seems a bit difficult to say teachin...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y lead to the desired results if he has the know how of how to approach the problem in f...
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Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ethical rights, world hunger and poverty , if they have the right logical skills t...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oncept of the pandemoniums. For example , we have seen that all the CEOs, CFOs , ...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e , we have seen that all the CEOs, CFOs , of corporate tech giants dont bank on m...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e CEOs, CFOs , of corporate tech giants dont bank on morality while strategizing a e...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ont bank on morality while strategizing a exigency. In the 2008 recession downfal...
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Line 11, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and form a society complete with morals , logical reasoning and towards a happier...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2956.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 603.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90215588723 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71507482068 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485903814262 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 933.3 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6615935529 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.15 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234668416101 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816278448645 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572134543305 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133937878091 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292771277812 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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