Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The investment a country's government makes, has an effect on the country and its peoples future. The prompt states,"governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military". It seems from the prompt that the government invest more in the military sector and relatively less on arts. I agree with the statement, but not completely as the government takes decisions on where and how much to invest, depending on the situation.
Firstly, more the investments are made in arts, the more number of people shall get involved in it. For example, if there aren't much investment made in arts, then less people shall opt it as a career, as they do not make much money out of it. Spending on military is important, but it is equally important to spend on other sectors as well. It is not only enough to protect the country, but also important to keep the civilians engaged in the country's culture and improvise it by getting them involved in arts and sciences. Getting people involved in arts is one way of expediting the move towards world peace.
In addition to that, art attenuates a country's culture and through good art, a country's pride increases. For instance, When we talk about a country, we often look into the great art and inventions created by its people in the past. The united kingdom is pride about shakespear and his work, italy about michelangelo, india about taj mahal and other great art forms, etc. It is art that increases the value of a country. All these had occurred because the then rulers and governments invested greatly in art. Shahjahan invested so much to build taj mahal, which is one of the seven wonders of the world. Only when art is supported, it shall give back great outcomes.
In contrast, as i had stated in the beginning, investments made by the government depends on the country's current situation. For example, if the country is in the middle of a war, it is obvious that the government would invest its wealth on military rather than art, because the peoples lives are more important than art. When the peoples lives are at stake, the government divert its spending towards the military sector in order to keep the people and the country safe. In such situations it would be bizarre to spend money on art rather than military.
In conclusion, the investments made by the government always depends on the country's current situation. Investing on both art and military is important, but their magnitude varies depending on the situation the country is in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82528735632 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77551341186 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445977011494 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4764861779 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4090909091 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173368425641 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608164177315 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468029525842 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10809815641 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466631560463 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.