Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Even todays world where technology is rapidly advancing and countries are flourishing, there are many villages still distant from basic medical and educational facilities. In that aspect, the recommendation from the author is beneficial and every child goes to college. However, I mostly disagree with the provided statement as the author has not accounted for the repurcussions of that suggestion. Hereby i provide a concession and 2 arguments stated below to edify the same.
On one hand, the childern coming from families who cannot afford their education, would be able to go to college, get their degree and go on to acheive a respectable position in the society. it also makes sure that no student is denied of knowledge because of money factor, which is not in their hands.
On the other hand, government providing college and univeristy education free of cost, would meen that financial burden is going to increase on the governement. Be it the infrastructure maintainance/resources costs or giving faculty and other staff salaries, they all add up to a huge amount of expenditure which is to be beared by the governement. this might not be effective way and undercuts the aim of author's implication that provinding free education would be propituous.
Moreover, this recommendation might as well result in lack of skilful teachers because the gorvernment itself is in crisis, thereby making the teachers to shift to other private colleges. this example undermines the whole point of providing education at free of cost and might not be effective in acheving it's purpose. For example, when government schools have been introduced, which cost very less compared to private schools, they ultimately remained unfruitful because teachers were not dedicated enough to do their job as they were not getting paid enough. this lead to decrease in efficacy of institution as a whole and many students dropped out of goverment school.
In conclusion, the intention of the author is set right towards a goal which if possible would be extremely beneficial for any country. but the author has to also look at the bigger picture in doing so. While the free education would be motiviating several students to pursue their interests and passion and be able to provide all the necessities to their family by doing jobs but government should also make sure that the quality of education should not be impaired, only then the greater purpose of the recommendation would be acheived. Hence the author needs to introspect more on the above provided arguments and come up with a better solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13475177305 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97071045014 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6929811498 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.764705882 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8823529412 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139003509286 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436829156971 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030771865771 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769996273459 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02192551825 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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