Education is very important for the development of any country. The author states that the education system of the country should be free. The given topic is highly contentious as some people may go for the topic while others can't approve it at all. I believe that the education system of the country should be free for the poor people who can't afford tuition fees, but shouldn't be free for all the students for the following reasons.
first of all, when education is made free for all the residents, then the government has to invest the majority of the budget for the education. In developing countries, like Nepal, where people are struggling for eating day and night, if more amount of money is spent on education then there might be a more serious problem such as people may die because of hunger. In that situation, it is more important to provide food and cloth first rather than education. So, for the evaluation of the given recommendation, author must consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy of free education.
Furthermore, when education is provided free of cost, then the student becomes less motivated towards education and the quality of education may decrease. People feel secure, even if they didn't study well, there will be nothing financial cost will lose, as a result, the education of the individual may be drastically dropped down. For instances, in Nepal, Agriculture and Forestry University ( Province no. 3, Nepal), started free education for all the students since 2010, however, the quality of the education decreases significantly and the performance of the student dropped down, then university decided to take fee from university and able to restore it's fame within short period of time again.
Thirdly, Of course, some may argue that education should be free so that they can get a better job after their graduation so that the economic condition of the country can be improved. However, the education system can only be improved only when taking a fee from student's who can pay tuition fee and should be free for those sedulous students, who are unable to study at the expense of the tuition fee so that student become more serious towards their study and the quality of education can be improved.
In a nutshell, education is a very important factor for the progress of any country, so the government should provide free education for those students who have talents but incapable of paying the tuition fee. But, the government should take tuition fee from those students who are able to pay tuition fee so that that money from capable students ( who are financially good) can be used for the other development of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... should be free for the poor people who cant afford tuition fees, but shouldnt be fr...
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...eople who cant afford tuition fees, but shouldnt be free for all the students for the fo...
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...pal, Agriculture and Forestry University Province no. 3, Nepal, started free educ...
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...d able to restore its fame within short period of time again. Thirdly, Of course, some may ar...
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...so that that money from capable students who are financially good can be used for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for instance, in short, of course, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 12.9106741573 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93362831858 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63337168081 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438053097345 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6187604893 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.375 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158258628911 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713302463644 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424651803931 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106307845985 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223473125162 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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