There is no shortage of opinions regarding how to measure how great and developed is a nation, what makess this issue a contentious one. While one advocates the level of population's wellfare is the best indicator, others hold that the number of achievements in art and science better represents countries prosperity. While each side as its strengths and weaknesses, I strongly believe that the level of general welfare experienced by the population better represents how well-develope is a nation. My understanting holds its basis mainly on the importance of social justice and equality in the society to make possible that all the population has descent and fair conditions to live.
Firstly, it is important to bear in mind that the concept of welfare was firstly introduced by northern eropean countries that stablished a state model based on the assumption that all citizens should be access to quality basic publics services, like health and education. The system would supported by the tax income collected from the middle and highest classes of the society. This model had counted for the prosperity of many european contries, like Norway, Finlad and Switzerland, for example. Such countries, where the quality of life is among the highest in the globe, however, is not greatly recognized by its artists, scientist or even by its technological discoveries, making this evidently less important to guarantee the prosperity of its citizens.
The second reason supporting my opinion is that a higher level of welfare results from heavly investments in education, what gives to all citizens same opportunities to access and compete in the labor and business market. With such approach, more skilled people is formed by the society when compared with countries that invest intensively in the frontier of science that can be accessed only by the richest part of the population.
On the other hand, one may argue that great achievements in scince and art better represents how advanced is a nation. Examples of developed countries like USA and Japan counts on this regard. Nevertheless, the highest countries in the list of infant, mortalit, education skills, quality of live, hapiness and peace are those where welfare state is the basis of the society.
To sum up, countries with highest level of welfare are often those where people have more quality of life and receive more opportunits to prosper in their lives. Thats why I definitely believe that welfare is the best indicator to measure countries prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, well, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21867321867 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84773898442 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528255528256 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0305960769 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.6 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139976618761 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450234441208 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483526187712 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071061837737 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301112394823 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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