There is no shortage of opinions regarding if technololy simplifies or complicates our daily lives, what makes this issues a contentious one. While each view has its strengths and weaknesses, I strongly believe that the access to technologies more simplifies than complicates the way we live and interact in society. My understanting holds its basis mainly on how technology makes complex activities easier and faster to be accomplished or solved, allowing us to save time and money.
Firstly, the technology advances during since the industrial revolution have deeply changed how people produce, trade and interact with each other. In a traditional society, where the economy was based on farming and trade of grains, wine and land, most of goods were handmade. After technological production process were implemented, people can make a lot of products in the same time and with less resources, making peoples lives flooded by cheaper technological goods, like cell phones, clothes and forniture.
Another point that makes peoples lives simpler by using technology is how we can fastly contract services through the internet without waste time and money going to phisical stores. For example, the internet has made pretty simple to to found and buy the best airline ticket for my next trip or even rent a car in advance. Without internet, I would need to spend time going to a travel agency to do so and would hinder my possibilities to compare prices among the cometitors.
On the other hand, one may argue that the access to technological services, like the internet, is still complicated specially for elderly. Nevertheless, in the last 10 years the technology based companies have been investing a lot in researchs and new products aimed to raise costumer experience. The idea is to making goods and services easier to be handled by anyone regardless either how much technology is embedded or how adroit is the customer.
To sum up, technology allows us to save time and money when performing complex and expensive activities. For theses reasons I definitely believe that tachnology simplifies our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the goods') or simply say ''most goods''.
Suggestion: most of the goods; most goods
...ing and trade of grains, wine and land, most of goods were handmade. After technological prod...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18128654971 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87532031483 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9708333283 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152197689178 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548215459826 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718901238908 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894514783516 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687111169672 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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