The human mind is superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds
This modern era carefully developed by the human beings. All of the machines are controlled by the man. For instance, recently to observe outer space scientists made the satellites. In some instances, machines are more talent than man; however, these entire artificial instrument made by the man and which are totally depend upon the human mind. I feel this way for some reasons: storage limit, controlled, and inherent capacity.
To begin with, human mind is bizarre¬¬: there is no any restriction and limit. We can found the limitless memory of the human mind. In this issue there is no any comparison between man and machines. Calculators can solve the difficult mathematical operations with-in seconds. But this limit also determine by the producer of that calculator. Even if fast performance to complete the task we use the help of machines; however, these machines work with single mind—they do not have capacity to move with diverse situation.
Secondly, human mind not bound with this limit. They are producing other unusual robot which can detect adverse conditions as well. If we compare with single task and related auto-machines then we find our mind less intense; although, in a panorama, our mind is extra-ordinary.
Finally, I can say man mind is eternal and father of machines. We cannot compare this context with the other any artificial things. The big invention of the modern era is modern computer, which can solve any task without any rest. This can complete difficult task persistently; whereas, that is controlled by the expert. Recently, scientists are going to measure the temperature of the star; but, their mind could not success to achieve this goal. After finding the solution this task is done by machine but controlled by the man. We can say human mind is creative: great.
To recapitulate, without proper plan and estimation machines cannot produced. Hence, we cannot compare the our mind with any dull and artificial things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...arefully developed by the human beings. All of the machines are controlled by the man. For...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...t made by the man and which are totally depend upon the human mind. I feel this way fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...with, human mind is bizarre¬¬: there is no any restriction and limit. We can found...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... the human mind. In this issue there is no any comparison between man and machines...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...nnot produced. Hence, we cannot compare the our mind with any dull and artificial thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13395638629 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75794376688 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7170671345 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.652173913 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9565217391 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275980005314 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922507726533 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088094442357 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183007929823 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387942987386 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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