The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Machines are a wonderful creation to mankind because it performs demanding tasks more efficiently than humans would. We are so dependent on machines that we subconsciously forget that we utilize them, from the early morning ring of the alarm clock to the late-night television show we watch before going to sleep. Almost everything we consume has gone through some process of machine work, from the food that is packaged from sophisticated machines to the clothes we wear that are produced from weaving looms. Albeit this development, the human mind will principally be superior to machines because machines are only tools created by humans. But in contrast, there are certain developments that go beyond human thinking capacity. The suggested prompt is partially true for the following three reasons.
Machines are tools created and controlled by humans to make everyday chores efficient. They are manufactured with a specified program embedded in it to perform a particular task. For instance, an alarm clock is programmed in a way such that its only function is to show the time and ring the alarm bell for when the time is set. A human brain is superior to machines because it follows the commands given by humans.
Machines are created to make human life easier and simpler. These inventions are originated because of the ideas engendering in the human brain. Humans tend to upgrade the machines with better features to make the task more efficient than it already is. For instance, every year there is a new technology with electronic products. A mobile, for instance, started off as a huge telephone with buttons and no wires but now it has evolved into a touchscreen smartphone that almost half the world carries in their pockets. Advancements of phone passwords from a digit password to a pattern to a gesture to a voice to a fingerprint to face identification shows the continuous lookout for improvement.These ideas are created by humans and programmed into a machine to be more productive and save time. Machines do not have the capacity to think for themselves hence the human mind will always be superior to a machine.
Artificial intelligence(AI) in the IT industry has been rising rapidly in all fields of work. This has been used to simplify the tedious tasks into simple ones. For instance, Turbo Tax, a software of US-based firm Intuit, prepares tax returns for individuals online with the help of artificial intelligence. Although AI has been praised widely for the tasks it can perform, it has encountered a strange incident undecipherable by humans. In the Facebook research and development lab, it was found that two AI bots were communicating in a language not known to humans. This reveals that AI has the ability to think more than humans can, at least at this moment.
To conclude, we should be thankful for the various inventions that have come across our lives to makes our daily activities easier. But due to the aforementioned reasons, we cannot completely agree that human minds are superior to that of a machine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...A mobile, for instance, started off as a huge telephone with buttons and no wires...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
... the continuous lookout for improvement.These ideas are created by humans and program...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...achine. Artificial intelligenceAI in the IT industry has been rising rapidly in all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, at least, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87052425174 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521653543307 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2315996084 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.92 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.32 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262263442879 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816635641199 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767377420655 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148923508697 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066706325623 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.