If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everyone in the world are struggle to achieve their goal/s. Everyone has their different goals. So, the prompt says that, If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. I am strongly agree with given prompt and i will describe my view about in two points.
To begin, Everyone has a goal in life. some people have short term goal some have long term goal and some have both goals. I think everyone should have their goal in life because if we not having any goal then our life will be meaningless. So everyone should focus on their goal to achieve in any circumstances. If we take particularly, everyone goal is worthy for that particular person and because of that goal, people will see the changes in their life as well as improvement in personal development so according to me everyone should work hard for to achieve goal at any cost.
If we take an example about the goal of cricket at World Cup match final, the goal of any team is to win the world cup and it is the highly worthy goal for the team as well as for there country. So achieve this goal the team member and whole committee do lots of hard work to achieve the goal in any condition. Sometimes the goal is not achieve then most of them go into depression and they taking self doubt. but we should learn from failure and done improvement in itself and achieve in later times.
However, we should do the hard work to achieve goals in positive direction not from the negative direction means we should do as possible attain in positive way not any cheating ,fraud or any robbery.
At the end, i think we should do anything to achieve our goal and learn and teach something to others from our journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, as for, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42628205128 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3472022843 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451923076923 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.722677266 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15411419005 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624968374654 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455624648549 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933635498804 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380870062038 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.