If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
worthy goal is a circumstantial term and depends how one construes it .What we choose as worthy goal in life and how we attain it is important for oneself to understand. I mostly disagree with the prompt and argue that ,"justifiable" mean to achieve ones' goal is highly circumstantial and depends on various factors.
To define a way as justifiable, many factors need to be considered and sometimes extreme steps taken in some sense becomes justifiable to meet a meaningful goal .For example, for a homeless poor man ,being able to get his kids at least one meal of the day maybe a goal ,a worthy one. So even if ,he tries to steal a some food of the fruit vendor, though a crime ,still be stated justifiable. To support this argument further, we consider situation : women trying to escape from the rapist ,while struggling to do so even if the perpetrator is fatally harmed seems justifiable way for the women to attain her goal ,saving her sanity. The motive of the goal and the circumstances while attaining it matters the most, as in above case, stealing some food or harming the rapist to escape is not the point but the factors that made the them do it, stealing some food ain't going to harm the vendor at great extent and detrimenting the rapist is the right choice women can think of while getting off.
Speaking of the goals, they are crucial part of any individual's life-giving him/her the direction and purpose to their actions .However, taking any means to achieve them is not acceptable .A common example of this is ,a man visions himself a millionaire, but robbing a bank to be one is not justified only to fulfill his dreams ,on the other hand ,a student studying hard to get high paying job and planning a proper path to be successful is the justified .
Hence, predicting whether a goal ,which a person is seeking is worth. At times, taking extreme measure is acceptable ,but people need to take into account some basic moral principles before taking such measures. Hence an individual should always consider the means he/she is using to fulfill the goal and weather a goal is that worthy of considering extreme steps in attaining it.
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- If a goal is worthy then any means taken to attain it are justifiable Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while, at least, for example, speaking of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72559366755 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79309737319 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569920844327 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.498908292 60.3974514979 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.1 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.9 23.4991977007 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 5.21951772744 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169265204699 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700893264445 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313451186099 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103606772577 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279715362344 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.