It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Belief is a notion, which the mind thinks is right, but there is no evidence to prove its credibility. Truth and belief are two different entities having only a meager quantity of knowledge in common. There is no protocol to define a belief. Different people have different beliefs, and it solely depends on an individual, if he is willing to compromise his notions. I feel, compromising one's beliefs sometimes can turn fortunes for a person, while blindly sticking to any idea might do no good. Without deep analysis of the situation a person is in, it is difficult to assert that comprising a belief is more harmful than adhering to it.
In present day situation, there is lot of competition among the youth for securing their jobs. Number of vacancies are limited when compared to the number of students graduating in any field. It is highly possible that an engineering graduate might get an offer of a clerical job, which is not pertaining to his field of study. Now, if the techie holds on to a belief that a technical person should not undertake any non technical work, then he is committing a big mistake. His financial condition might be desperately wanting him to start working as soon as possible. The best step in this case, would be to compromise on one's beliefs. Although, the idea of a technical person switching to non technical domain might not sound pleasing at first instant. But, the situation is demanding the person to give up on his notions rather than adhering to the same.
It is also important to consider another side of this argument, when one should definitely not compromise on one's beliefs. It is said, "The only thing that does not abide by the majority rule is a person's conscience." At work places, it is common to encounter situations where a person would be compelled to act against the integrity of standards. Bribery and corruption is rampant in today's world. No official can remain untouched from it. An individual is required not only to show rock solid faith is belief of not encouraging any unfair means, but should also religiously to adhere it. Ideals should never be compromised, for they portray a person's character.
To sum up, I would reiterate that compromising beliefs might not prove harmful if they are sacrificed for a rightful purpose. While, it is of utmost importance to adhere to one's ideals or beliefs, when morality is at stake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... mistake. His financial condition might be desperately wanting him to start working as soon as possibl...
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Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be to compromise on one's beliefs. Although, the idea of a technical person switchi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'i feel', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202040816327 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.177551020408 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755102040816 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0530612244898 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469387755102 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0469387755102 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92380035105 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0448979591837 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00408163265306 0.0016655270985 245% => OK
Determiners: 0.0877551020408 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0285714285714 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.0148568991511 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2445.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93446601942 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381067961165 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279126213592 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223300970874 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150485436893 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92380035105 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 62.4535686133 55.4138127331 113% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7272727273 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8589968804 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.136363636 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 46.6398940865 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.25735294118 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389204925652 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0696966827179 0.123202303941 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0437612234422 0.077325440228 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461978194017 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141360540039 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145241473779 0.161403998019 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746596079308 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423605049302 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0304160478993 0.0692045440612 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288131050676 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297468685873 0.0653680567796 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.