It is true that every individual has their own beliefs. No one is perfect ,so it is possible that every individual is likely to make mistakes during decision making process. The author asserts that compromising their own beliefs is more dangerous than to accept the new idea. The given topic is highly contentious, as different people have their own opinion, some people may go for the topic, while others can’t approve the topic fully. I personally believe that accepting own belief or compromising own belief is conditional i.e. depends upon the situation.
First of all, under certain circumstances conceding own belief is more harmful than to adhere them. For instance, someone beliefs that establishment of new poultry factory in Chitwan is more profitable than others parts of the country, Nepal. However, it might be possible that condition of the poultry enterprises is more pernicious condition than forever so that if one proceeds to establish poultry farm rather than to compromise his thought then the consequences are more serious. So, prior taking decision, one should consider the possible consequences that may occur upon accepting the idea so that the possible consequences can be minimized.
Furthermore, it is possible that the resultant effect of the accepting own thought may be more harmful to the society as well. For example, if one find corruption in his office and he don’t report it to the concerned authority rather than accept that situation then in such situation accepting that new thought is more harmful than to compromise that types of things.
However, under certain circumstances, compromising own beliefs is more harmful than to accepts that views. Say, Mahatma Gandhi, beliefs that India can be made free from British colonies through independent movements, if he compromised his thought then the today India is not in that freedom state. So, it is important to make decisions by careful consideration of the possible consequences after compromising own thoughts,
In conclusion, accepting or compromising own beliefs depends upon the types of belief that the person has. If the accepting own beliefs is more harmful than to adhering then one should compromise, but if the accepting that belief is less harmful than to accepting than in that situation one should compromise his thought for the betterment of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...has their own beliefs. No one is perfect ,so it is possible that every individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26649076517 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87613710255 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448548812665 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7109333 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.066666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213620666099 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958883085832 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585579477514 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144920825781 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341353886582 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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