It is debatable whether contemporary people are more prudent than ancient people. In this regard, I disagree with the statement that knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today. This is because the past lessons can lead people to decide their behavior with insight and proved experiences.
Admittedly, it might be difficult to make important decision nowadays because many things are more complex in today than in the past. Recently due to technological development, life style has been changed in many fields. For example, Park Geun-hye, a former President in South Korea, was impeached because she had used public budgets as privately. Even though in the past there were some cases that former Presidents appropriated public budgets like President Park, and citizens have learned about the history, no one could predict the illegal behavior of her. This is because the main key to allow her to infringe upon laws was a tablet PC which was used to communicate with her accomplice. These technological advances might hamper people to monitor their President.
However, in many cases, the past lessons are significantly helpful to overcome current problems. In economic issue, it is important and useful to analyze a certain pattern which reported from the past so that economists and policy makers can make decisions by predicting results. For example, Barack Obama, a former President in the United States, faced an economic crisis in 2008. Even though the embarrassing situation, President Obama led the States successfully to overcome the crisis by taking lessons which President Franklin D. Roosevelt provided. Because of the history, Obama was able to discern that the crisis is similar with the previous crisis, the Great Depression which Roosevelt resolved. Thus, to acquire knowledge from the past is beneficial to carry out(?) better situations.
Moreover, even if today's issues are more complicated than before in some aspects, people are easily influenced from the past issues. Martin Luther King, Jr.'s non-violence movement is a good example to demonstrate the argument. In the 1960s, King contended to provide freedom for all African American without any violence. Since he was deeply impressed from the previous non-violence movement of Gandhi, he decided to choose the similar way to require the freedom successfully. Therefore, knowing about the past gives more opportunities to take better decision and achievements.
To sum up, although, in some cases, the previous events seems unapplied to current ones, there are many merits to be provided from the past. People can get more valuable lessons and impression to decide today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 775, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Better
...om the past is beneficial to carry out? better situations. Moreover, even if todays...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in many cases, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37203791469 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74216490036 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4564198276 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.045454545 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215024239653 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602383692072 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823513833633 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125392607053 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710352875144 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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