Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
The main thing that differentiates humans from other animals is that humans follow certain law and order. If we had no law and order everything would be in an amok state. Even though laws are not meant to bend for any personal in some rare cases exceptions can be depending upon the circumstances, times, and place. I agree with the given prompt for the following reasons.
In cases of emergency and need one need to be compassionate and understand others problems. For example if there was a stringent rule of not speeding over a certain limit in a locality and someone faces an emergency in which one needs to be rushed to the hospital and no ambulances are available maybe due to ill weather, so the driver may need to break the speed limit to save someone's life and in this case punishing the person would be unjustifiable.
However, one might say, there are downsides of having flexible laws as people might misusing there influence and getting away with illicit activities. For instance just because someone is related to a politician, actor or even another cop they might get away with there wrong doing. But this is not compulsory as there could be a guideline and example cases which clearly outline the case in which the laws can be flexible, like breaking a traffic signal to get to the hospital and not so much for breaking the traffic signal to get to work on time just because one woke up late.
In the end there are positives and negatives to every side but in the case on flexible laws the positive outweigh the negatives as the only negative it has is one in a while one might get out of trouble by lying, on the contrary the positives are if there is a misunderstanding or a important situation in which one has to break the law they are given the chance to justify their cause for breaking the law.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sonal in some rare cases exceptions can be depending upon the circumstances, times, and plac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h one needs to be rushed to the hospital and no ambulances are available maybe du...
^^
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s are if there is a misunderstanding or a important situation in which one has to...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55319148936 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58600280368 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.449325444 60.3974514979 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.8 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146217667688 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603246094563 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386510754569 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900557517768 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275183115771 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sonal in some rare cases exceptions can be depending upon the circumstances, times, and plac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h one needs to be rushed to the hospital and no ambulances are available maybe du...
^^
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s are if there is a misunderstanding or a important situation in which one has to...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55319148936 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58600280368 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.449325444 60.3974514979 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.8 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146217667688 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603246094563 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386510754569 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900557517768 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275183115771 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.