The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Nowadays, technology makes human lives so much easier in contrast to early humans. For instance one doesn't need to go out for food instead he/she can just order food online. The prompt states that this lifestyle comes with a cost of undermining humans lifespan. Moreover, this kind of lifestyle impede development of humans into strong or independent. In my opinion, I partially agree with the prompt statement on the basis of three reasons.
Nowadays technological services makes humans dependent in one way or another, not only it makes us dependent but also dopamine addict. For instance, gaming industries launch games that targets children who otherwise would have played outdoors. This in the long run will harm children by making them just sit in their room for hours playing games with no human interaction and will also make them miserable and lonely. As illustrated in the example conveniences of modern life also had downsides to it. Nevertheless, it is also true that technology is also boon for humans as it enable everyone to access information. This information is used by college students, school students, etc.
Luxuries and conveniences of modern life enables humans to live their life to the fullest, but also if humans become dependent on them then it is a curse. For instance, one have a macbook and he can do whatever with it. One can binge netflix all day or he/she can install productivity apps like notion and be disciplined and in turn organize their life more efficiently. Nonetheless, these luxuries of modern life making humans progress difficult is also contingent upon its users too.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...trast to early humans. For instance one doesnt need to go out for food instead he/she ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll also make them miserable and lonely. As illustrated in the example conveniences...
^^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... college students, school students, etc. Luxuries and conveniences of modern life...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, for instance, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 267.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75636601702 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.859831903 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848883980795 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336380272536 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540877009341 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613919197745 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352066417029 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...trast to early humans. For instance one doesnt need to go out for food instead he/she ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll also make them miserable and lonely. As illustrated in the example conveniences...
^^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... college students, school students, etc. Luxuries and conveniences of modern life...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, for instance, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 267.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75636601702 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.859831903 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848883980795 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336380272536 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540877009341 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613919197745 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352066417029 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.