Luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t

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Suggestion: , technology
Because of globalization,technology,developed economy and society resources...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'been increased'.
Suggestion: been increased
...society resources for earning money has been increased been increased making many of them to live a sumptuous...
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Suggestion: Most
...provided with all luxuries and comforts.Most of the people are accustomed to this li...
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Suggestion: Whether
... the people are accustomed to this life.Whether this lavish and convenient life is prev...
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Suggestion: Some
...and independent persons is debated many.Some argue that sumptuous living provides ac...
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Suggestion: However,
...o strong and independent personalities. However this lavish life actually hampers many ...
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Suggestion: , and
...s;t barely have any difficulties in life,and challenges in life.I too believe that l...
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Suggestion: I
...iculties in life,and challenges in life.I too believe that luxurious life hinders...
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Suggestion:
...independent attitude for many reasons. Luxurious life prevents from facing many...
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Suggestion: Difficulties
...ually necessary to develop strong minds.Difficulties include financial problems.As the peopl...
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Suggestion: As
...Difficulties include financial problems.As the people who lead luxurious life have...
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Suggestion: , leading
...money like money necessary for education,leading a pleasant life. In addition most of th...
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Suggestion: addition,
...r education,leading a pleasant life. In addition most of them don't have health pro...
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Suggestion: As
...of them don't have health problems.As people have money they have access to g...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...uce the health problems if they are any.Furthermore they don't have strong minds to ad...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...uce the health problems if they are any.Furthermore they don't have strong minds to ad...
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Suggestion: , good
...us living provides all comforts like car,good home,and all things needed for joyful l...
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Suggestion: , and
...provides all comforts like car,good home,and all things needed for joyful life etc.T...
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Suggestion: They
...d all things needed for joyful life etc.They feel extremely disappointed even their ...
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Suggestion:
...their small wish isn't fulfilled. The people who are accustomed to lavish ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to lavishing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to lavishing
... The people who are accustomed to lavish life are hardly find their own way and ...
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Suggestion: found
...re accustomed to lavish life are hardly find their own way and are dependent on mone...
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Suggestion: They
...heir own way and are dependent on money.They are dependent on money for their educat...
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Suggestion: They
... dependent on money for their education.They pay off tuition fees and college fees w...
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Suggestion: part-time
...hard to get scholarship or by taking up part time job.In addition they also don't fi...
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Suggestion: In
...holarship or by taking up part time job.In addition they also don't find thei...
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Suggestion: addition,
...arship or by taking up part time job.In addition they also don't find their own way...
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Suggestion: Most
...o don't find their own way to earn.Most them would take up business started up ...
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Suggestion: In
...ake pain of working and facing problems.In fact, we can rarely see children of suc...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...ldren of successors becoming successors.Furthermore they are also dependent on others to so...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ldren of successors becoming successors.Furthermore they are also dependent on others to so...
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Suggestion: For
...ndent on others to solve their problems.For instance if they are psychological prob...
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Suggestion: , but
...elp of a good doctor or parents to solve,but rarely try to find a way out of themsel...
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...y try to find a way out of themselves. In conclusion luxurious life can hinder ...
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Suggestion: They
...lop strong minds and live independently.They don't face many challenges in life...
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Suggestion: People
...hallenges in life and work on their own.People can develop strong mind if they lead no...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ld and confidence to live independently.Thus, the present life of sumptuous living i...
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Suggestion:
...oping strong and independent attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58079625293 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45974014078 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456674473068 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.462935905 60.3974514979 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 340.428571429 118.986275619 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 23.4991977007 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 5.21951772744 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194928694227 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125201630152 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804962178164 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144151736859 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792788089417 0.0667264976115 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 14.1392134831 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 48.8420337079 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 12.1743820225 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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