"Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because
moral behavior cannot be legislated."
it is true that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws, as moral behavior is something for which a person has to be responsible himself. although there are some problems that can be solved by laws, other problems like moral behavior have to be solved by the persons themselves.
it is a persons responsibility to judge his behavior and follow the rules formed for the welfare of the society. law cannot punish every person for his or her behavior. For example, to save water or not to waste water is the moral responsibility of every member of a society. Any law cannot punish an individual for such behavior. In the first look, it does not seem to be a big harm to the society but in the end, he is wasting a precious thing. Similarly, the behaviors like throwing plastic in public or spitting in public places is certainly not good behavior. laws can do little to stop these behaviors. however, there are countries where there are laws to punish a person who does not behave properly in public places.
Similarly, with the invention of internet, there are more and more of cyber crimes where it is difficult to find a witness. A person can easily hide his identity, his name, sex, address on the internet. Hence, it becomes very difficult for law to punish the criminal. although now a days, lawmakers have also found the ways to identify these persons. however, here again, moral behavior can play a role in reducing these kind of crimes.
however, we cannot underestimate the importance of laws in our life. we need laws to protect ourselves and punish those who harm the society. law helps in balancing the society to be more harmonious and peaceful. although moral behavior cannot be legislated, thorough enforcement of a few laws can help to solve social problems to some extent. laws teach people many things about moral behavior and force them to follow those rules. If everyone conforms to laws, it would be very easy for everyone to get rid of social problems.
Still, there are people who find it difficult to follow the laws. Then for these types of people, there should be strict punishments. Otherwise, it will be very difficult to live in the society. Only enactment of stringent laws can protect everyone in the society from the problems caused by the non-moral behavior of a few persons.
To make our society, we have to instill good values in the society at the school and college levels. it will help to teach the students a subject related to moral behavior in their schools and colleges. This will help in reducing problems related to moral behavior.
Hence, although moral behavior cannot be legislated, laws have to be there to curb the problems arising out of immoral behavior. The society and laws have to work hand-in-hand to solve the problems of the modern society and to make our society peaceful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, then, as to, for example, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76814516129 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55374080352 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417338709677 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6336895367 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357109046318 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102972082817 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10560331126 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213677820042 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13901341394 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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