Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Men and Women are the two parts of the same coin. Yes i believe Men and Women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical dfifferences. While there are some jobs that better suit a women and some jobs where men achieve better results.
Men generally have more physical strength than their counterparts. They are better suited for work where heavy lifting, fighting or power is required. Men have hormone Testostereone which is more towards the strength and power side that is why we can see more men working on construction sites as workers than women. Even in countries like India, mechanical engineering is still considered more by boys in college than girls.
Subsequently, women have better emotional quotient than men. They are better at dealing emotions. It is proven that woman have a high sympathetic rate than a man. A woman can sympathise,empathise better and are good at dealing with emotions. A woman differs from their male counterparts on the release of these two hormones Oxytocin and Progesterone. Women are more sensitive. Woman are better suited for jobs like in Information technology, Human Resources.
Consequently,we can not forget how woman are the birth machines and the child bearers. A man can't give birth or feed their babies. Being a mother is one of the most difficult tasks that the men can not simply do. A woman has a womb with is the biggest physical difference we can see.
Though the times are changing now, We are seeing women doing more strenouos jobs. With such physical dfiiferences, both of the sides can give tough competition to each other.Therefore, I will like to conclude that that men and women are two sides of the same coin who have to go hand in hand with each other for a better tomorrow.
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...ith each other for a better tomorrow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91089108911 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82397575557 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7659659172 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18066313822 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593286090489 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643063566427 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109701293918 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580833922905 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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